I like your story and I think you should have made it long because of what will happen to the parents.
Feb 21, 2008 Rating
Dude that rocked by: Anonymous
Hey man, this story rocked. It kind of freaked me out! I give you five stars cause it is awesome.
Feb 11, 2008 Rating
okay by: Anonymous
it's okay
Mar 10, 2008 Rating
Good but could be better!! by: lover of freaks!
If only it was longer and had a freaky message at the end like 'you can run but you can't stay alive. so watch your back because I might be stabbing it! hahahahahahahahaha' it might be you next or something, but a good story!
