awesome story!!! best one ive read so far!! LOVE the ending!!
Jun 07, 2009 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
wow that was kinda funny at the end its all like " NOOOO, YOU better run!!!!!"
Dec 21, 2008 Rating
..... by: Tasia
this story was in no way scary lol but it was very creative i liked it good job....
Jul 05, 2008 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
That was wicked man, the poor boy, was he dead or not. oh check out my story if it is published its "The fog by the riverside" and post some comments cheers xx
May 20, 2008 Rating
OOHHH! by: Caz
Ohhh! WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN? That story was great! It was very scary! Check out "Revenge" by me!
