Would you play with me

by Jose
(Atlantic City)

I was walking down the street when I heard someone say "would you play with me". I looked over and saw no one standing there. "That was weird" I said. My name is Jason Clarke, and let me tell you a scary story about today. I was standing there looking confused after I heard someone saying "Would you play with me".


"I would play with you but I can't see you. Where are you come out". "I'm right here". "But where? I can't see you". "I'm right here".

I ran away from where I was standing. It was weird that someone was talking but I couldn't see the person. Later, I went home and tried to forget about what happened next to the store, but those words kept on repeating in my head "Would you play with me, Would you play with me".
After that I called my friend Danny Cruz so we could go play basketball. And you won't guess what happened there.

"Nice shot,Danny" I said. "Thanks, now let me see you shoot here". "Would you play with me" came that mysterious voice again. We both turned around and no one there.

When I came home and went to bed you should guess that that was when it was all answered.

"Would you play with me" again came that voice. "Who's there? Reveal yourself NOW!!!" "I'm right in front of you". "No you're not. Reveal yourself". So the ghost did and when I saw it I screamed in terror.

It had three eyes and its face was burned. It came over to me and grabbed my face and ripped out my eyes. It took out my flesh limb by limb.

When my parents came in my room the next morning and saw a message in my bed it said "WOULD YOU PLAY WITH ME"

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Nov 15, 2009
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i dot get it
by: Lauren Gravell

heeeyyya nice story, very gud, but how could you be telling this story when your limbs are being teared apart, but i loved it, look at my story,

mad man in the dark

luv lauren

Oct 02, 2009
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great
by: Anonymous

it was actually a good story but it would have been better if you hadnt told it from yur point of view...

Apr 01, 2009
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it was ok?
by: Anonymous

it was ok...until the last part....it will be better if it happened to ur friend...cuz u said it was YOU but if it WAS u...YOU wouldnt be HERE writing that now would u?

Jan 24, 2009
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OK
by: Josh

How Could You Write This Story If You Are Dead or Missing Your Limbs?

Sep 04, 2008
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Bogus
by: Anonymous

That was so fake how could you have written this if it tared out your limbs seriously!


- Stephanie and katie -

May 19, 2008
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Cool Story!
by: Caz

WOW! Super scary! That made me shiver!

Apr 05, 2008
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Good, could be better
by: Victoria

I liked it, lots. But a few little things didn't please me. If you're telling the story, how can you be dead? But I loved the whole theme. I really liked it, though.

If I could suggest something, in scary stories, there is one I wrote called "Bone Dry Killer", take a look at it.

Mar 31, 2008
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Wow
by: Jasmine

That was super scary, but is it actually real?

Mar 28, 2008
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Wow
by: Anonymous

That was actually pretty good! Lots of suspense.

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