I liked it, lots. But a few little things didn't please me. If you're telling the story, how can you be dead? But I loved the whole theme. I really liked it, though.
If I could suggest something, in scary stories, there is one I wrote called "Bone Dry Killer", take a look at it.
Sep 04, 2008 Rating
Bogus by: Anonymous
That was so fake how could you have written this if it tared out your limbs seriously!
