heeeyyya nice story, very gud, but how could you be telling this story when your limbs are being teared apart, but i loved it, look at my story,
mad man in the dark
luv lauren
Oct 02, 2009 Rating
great by: Anonymous
it was actually a good story but it would have been better if you hadnt told it from yur point of view...
Apr 01, 2009 Rating
it was ok? by: Anonymous
it was ok...until the last part....it will be better if it happened to ur friend...cuz u said it was YOU but if it WAS u...YOU wouldnt be HERE writing that now would u?
Jan 24, 2009 Rating
OK by: Josh
How Could You Write This Story If You Are Dead or Missing Your Limbs?
Sep 04, 2008 Rating
Bogus by: Anonymous
That was so fake how could you have written this if it tared out your limbs seriously!
- Stephanie and katie -
May 19, 2008 Rating
Cool Story! by: Caz
WOW! Super scary! That made me shiver!
Apr 05, 2008 Rating
Good, could be better by: Victoria
I liked it, lots. But a few little things didn't please me. If you're telling the story, how can you be dead? But I loved the whole theme. I really liked it, though.
If I could suggest something, in scary stories, there is one I wrote called "Bone Dry Killer", take a look at it.
