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Dec 01, 2011
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excellent
by: Anonymous

I love your story. I like the way you wrote about the man. At the end he wasn't there... or was he?

Nov 28, 2011
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Good story!
by: Anonymous

I give this story 5 stars I like how you describe the man but at the end we find out that he wasnt really there... or was he? The ending I like the most because it makes you judge who you think the man was in your own mind.

Nov 28, 2011
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sorry
by: writer

im sorry i misspelled a couple things and didnt really use proper grammer but i think yall still get the whole point of the story and the title was supposed to have a question mark but i guess i didnt put it again im sorry but hope yall still like it :)

Dec 03, 2011
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Not bad but sorry
by: Anonymous

I don't really get the ending but you made a good try. I don't hate this story, but please try again.

I'll give you 1 star anyway. Sorry

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