Water Girl

by David
(Philippines)

There was once a family named the "Davids". Steven Davids is the father, he own a very large toy company. Susanna Davids is his wife, she owns a very admirable boutique of wedding gowns. The couple has twins named Christina and Kristine.


Christina grew up to be sassy, envious and boastful, while her sister Kristine is shy and so asthma prone that she tends to stay at home while her twin sister goes out with her friends.

The parents decided that the two should be home-schooled especially for Kristine. Her parents give her special attention because of her condition. Christina became jealous for that.

One day, the family went to their vacation house which is in a forest a few kilometers out of the city. It was a very big vacation house indeed, with glass walls. A few days later, Christina hated her sister more and more, so she plotted a plan to get rid of her..

She took her mother's trademark coat, a bright red and a matching hat. The air in the forest was good for Kristine so she was always found beside the well. Suddenly she was hit on the head with a piece of wood she lost consciousness. It was Christina, wearing her mother's clothes, she opened the lid of the well half-way and threw Kristine's body inside, hitting the water so hard, Kristine opened her eyes and looked up, she saw a girl in bright red coat and hat, she knew it was her mother, it was actually Christina; pushed the lid back to close the well, Kristine panicked and eventually had a asthma attack, she can't breath that she drowned in the water.

That night, her parents were looking for Kristine, they sent the cops to look for her but they didn't have a trace. Kristine's spirit lives on that she climbed out of the well, opened the lid and walked towards their vacation house, her mother was crying in the bathroom, but stopped when the lights went out. She screamed as Kristine's ghost
crawled towards her, the next day she was found lying on the floor, with pale, wrinkly skin, as if she drowned and decayed in water.

Kristine's ghost was out of her mind. She killed her family and the people that enter their vacation house. They said that the "Water Girl" has long hair, pale skin that was wrinkly, her head was bleeding and her clothes were dirty brown and soaked in water. She mysteriously kills everyone that entered the house by drowning them like what happened to her when she died.

The house is now said to be haunted by the unknown. "water girl".

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Sep 17, 2015
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My blood stands still
by: My blood stands still

My blood stands still when I read something like this. I can only imagine what it will feel like to watch a movie with this scenario.

Aug 06, 2010
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Awesome
by: Gershal

Interesting. I must get my daughter to read your story.Keep writing.

Oct 16, 2009
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Awesome Story!!!
by: Anonymous

I loved your story! Keep up the great work!

Jun 13, 2009
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wow!
by: Anna

good job! i loved this story! it was really good!! Please write more!!!! 5 stars!!!!

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