if you would have said the title would be:I Am Never Relaxed At My House Because Of My Bother because it doesnt really talk about if he was annoying or not because it said that you never have time alone in your room so if you have changed your title the story couldn't of been much better than you thought it would be.
But your story was really good
though but not fantastic.
Feb 01, 2008 Rating
BOO! by: HUMPH!
BORING! BOO!
Jan 11, 2008 Rating
Great story! by: Shnoik
Hi Chaya,
THat was such a cool story! One question: I was a bit confused - what did the narrator not do, which would have made her little brother worse?
Love, your adoring big sis
Dec 11, 2008 Rating
Confusing by: Weird
The story was okay. For instance, why did Harry/Jack say "I thought she hated me!" Isn't "I thought she LOVED me." The story was really confusing.
Apr 08, 2008 Rating
Why does the brother... by: Anonymous
Change his name around half into the story, it is funny but there is no ending to it.
Feb 03, 2008 Rating
nice but not really peaceful by: Ashley
if you would have said the title would be:I Am Never Relaxed At My House Because Of My Bother because it doesnt really talk about if he was annoying or not because it said that you never have time alone in your room so if you have changed your title the story couldn't of been much better than you thought it would be.
But your story was really good
though but not fantastic.
