Twisted Vampire Tale

I held my breath and listened. Nothing there. I walked further. I heard the rustling sound again. I stopped and held my breath. Again nothing. It was probably my imagination but I felt my heart beat faster.


I started to shiver even though it was June. I tried to make as little sound as possible. Suddenly I heard a thumping noise. I spun around. Nothing. When I spun myself back around, a figure was right in front of me. I didn’t have much time to look at it but it had a cruel smile and long nails. It’s nails seemed stained.

I ran faster than I’d ever run. I knocked at the door but no one was home. The figure was lazily walking towards me as if it was just strolling. I got my back against the wall and started to cry. I felt a pain in my neck and it was over.

It isn’t that bad being human. I thought it would be worse. I still miss being a vampire though. I miss those days before I was bitten by a human.

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Oct 01, 2009
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bravo!
by: Anonymous

this story was awesome and funny! sorry, but it wasnt scary though. you have quite an imagination and i love how you put a spin on the old vampire tale. keep up the good work. the title was catchy also. (since im a vamp lover)

Jul 25, 2009
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awsome
by: Anonymous

i like it..its all topsy turvey than a regular vampire story/....very good very good bravo...brava...<3 it!!!

Jul 14, 2009
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Needs some fixing
by: Vanessa

This IS a little scary. but you see when i read the beggining i thought your story might be those types where you start at the middle and then go back to the beggining. well yours never had a beginning. sorry but it wasnt that fun to read. And bitten by a human? i dont get it..what does that mean? sorry. maybe your still a young learner.

Jun 29, 2009
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ok.....
by: percyjacksonfan#458

this is a bizzare story! no offence...

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