this story was awesome and funny! sorry, but it wasnt scary though. you have quite an imagination and i love how you put a spin on the old vampire tale. keep up the good work. the title was catchy also. (since im a vamp lover)
Jul 25, 2009 Rating
awsome by: Anonymous
i like it..its all topsy turvey than a regular vampire story/....very good very good bravo...brava...<3 it!!!
Jul 14, 2009 Rating
Needs some fixing by: Vanessa
This IS a little scary. but you see when i read the beggining i thought your story might be those types where you start at the middle and then go back to the beggining. well yours never had a beginning. sorry but it wasnt that fun to read. And bitten by a human? i dont get it..what does that mean? sorry. maybe your still a young learner.
