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Aug 05, 2017
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Very good! NEW
by: Anonymous

Shifa, it is a good try! This is your second story here but your surname is not appearing in full...any way congrats on your effort.

Aug 04, 2017
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Good try. Get the reader more involved.
by: Phil

You can write a longer story, and try to include more pictures with captions. Hope to see more.

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