This is a great story, Nathaniel. You have such a good imagination and exciting way of telling stories. I hope you write more. I think this story is better than a lot of grown up stories I've read. I like the part about the portal. :)
Nov 29, 2008 Rating
Congratulations by: Grammy Sue
Hi Nathaniel,
I loved your story and I am very proud of you. Keep up the good work.
Nov 28, 2008 Rating
Great Story! by: Anonymous
I really enjoyed your story! I hope you keep writing, because I think you will be really great at it. Very creative.
