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Nov 30, 2008
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Great story!
by: Aura

This is a great story, Nathaniel. You have such a good imagination and exciting way of telling stories. I hope you write more. I think this story is better than a lot of grown up stories I've read. I like the part about the portal. :)

Nov 29, 2008
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Congratulations
by: Grammy Sue

Hi Nathaniel,

I loved your story and I am very proud of you. Keep up the good work.

Nov 28, 2008
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Great Story!
by: Anonymous

I really enjoyed your story! I hope you keep writing, because I think you will be really great at it. Very creative.

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