There's no escape

by Reem Assaff

Creature

Creature

Lots of people used to believe a myth about a guy who was going to the tools store and went to work there and later had a customer.


A drunk and deadly creature approaching the counter, there he was on the floor and he laid there until he was skin and bones and since then no one came to that weapons store.

Now they say that when you go to that store deep in Los Angeles, you will hear the screams of his voice from when he was murdered. Then as soon as you come in you never come out!

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May 27, 2011
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Structure
by: Anonymous

Ummmm... Did you even read this after you wrote it? It is so hard to follow and the sentences do not even make sense.

Nov 25, 2010
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confused
by: Anonymous

first it was a tool shop then a weapons store. and how'd the creature kill him?

Oct 29, 2007
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by: PB&Mayo

There is no story here. Most people want a thrilling scary story that they can believe and be scared of. This story is just facts and its not even one paragragh long. I think that the story needs to be more developed even if you stretch the truth a little people dont care if its truthful they just want a good scare

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