Ummmm... Did you even read this after you wrote it? It is so hard to follow and the sentences do not even make sense.
Nov 25, 2010 Rating
confused by: Anonymous
first it was a tool shop then a weapons store. and how'd the creature kill him?
Oct 29, 2007 Rating
BORING by: PB&Mayo
There is no story here. Most people want a thrilling scary story that they can believe and be scared of. This story is just facts and its not even one paragragh long. I think that the story needs to be more developed even if you stretch the truth a little people dont care if its truthful they just want a good scare
