this is really good. i was reading this in the daytime with light all around me, and it *still* freaked me out! good job
Dec 04, 2010 Rating
nice by: Anonymous
nice story
Jul 28, 2010 Rating
Not so scary by: shakeel
plz dont feel bad, there is some scaryness is mising in ur story,i shud get scared while reading only, this my opinion i dont no about others! u can make more scarier then this story..take care
