Your story was VERY good. I like how at the end you put in the twist when the girl told the man that he had her finger.
Oct 06, 2010 Rating
cool by: Anonymous
great story and i loved the ending!!! You would think that the man would reconized his own wifebut over all that story was great!!!
Oct 01, 2009 Rating
suspicous by: Anonymous
good job. i know that i've heard this story before but you did an excellent job changing it and adding your own little twist. next time try writing something 100% origional! =]
Jul 18, 2009 Rating
Excuse me? by: I D
You'd think that the man would recognize his own wife.
