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The Photograph

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Feb 18, 2010
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by: VS in WA

I am quite impressed. I have published many books, and I am in eighth grade. I loved your story and how it tempted me for more. What you did at the end is called a cliffhanger. You left the reader thinking. I cannot write a cliffhanger for my life, so very fine job. Five stars for singapore!!
Jan 26, 2010
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starstarstar 		ok
by: Anonymous

hmmm quite scary
Jan 13, 2010
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by: Anonymous

Hi,
I know , I am not much of a writer,but i think your story is incomplete...you should at least tell what was in the photo....

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