that was awesome great job as everyone said u have a talent loved it an want more!
May 22, 2009 Rating
Australia by: Emma
WOW!!! You are so creative. How can you do that? When your character was nervous I was nervous. I love (!) your describing. WOW!
Sep 18, 2008 Rating
Superb by: Anonymous
I am REALLY impressed by your writing. It was an excellent story. Keep it up!
Aug 04, 2008 Rating
VERY FUNNY! by: Burst302 (my clubpenguin.com name!)
I loved it! Ingenious work, except for one thing. Is it supposed to be 'LIGHTS,camera, action'- or is it just me? My most sincere apologies if it isn't.
P.S. Please post and you can find me on
clubpenguin.com as Burst if you want
Aug 02, 2008 Rating
Amazing! by: Anonymous
I loved this story because when I read it, I thought you had put it into the wrong section! I thought it should have been in the "scary stories" section! Brilliant!
Jul 31, 2008 Rating
Wow! by: Carrie
Don't be silly Unit! lol! This story was amazing! Whoever thought of it was a genious! x
Jun 15, 2008 Rating
Sweet by: Anonymous
I fell in love with this story, it gave me a great idea.
May 08, 2008 Rating
Amazing by: Anonymous
This story is truly amazing. He who said that this story was lame is truly someone who doesn't have a good choice and taste.
Mar 03, 2008 Rating
Splendid story by: Anonymous
It is really a creative story that has a twist in the tale. Wonderful!
