hey nikitaa.... my name is shubhendu and i am an student of animation in chandigarh, i want to use your story for an animated short film i'll be making....all i need is your permission... P.S: here's my email- b3n@live.in here's my cell no'- 9464820774
please do contact....
May 22, 2009 Rating
Wow by: 1k1
that was awesome great job as everyone said u have a talent loved it an want more!
May 22, 2009 Rating
Australia by: Emma
WOW!!! You are so creative. How can you do that? When your character was nervous I was nervous. I love (!) your describing. WOW!
Sep 18, 2008 Rating
Superb by: Anonymous
I am REALLY impressed by your writing. It was an excellent story. Keep it up!
Aug 04, 2008 Rating
VERY FUNNY! by: Burst302 (my clubpenguin.com name!)
I loved it! Ingenious work, except for one thing. Is it supposed to be 'LIGHTS,camera, action'- or is it just me? My most sincere apologies if it isn't.
P.S. Please post and you can find me on
clubpenguin.com as Burst if you want
Aug 02, 2008 Rating
Amazing! by: Anonymous
I loved this story because when I read it, I thought you had put it into the wrong section! I thought it should have been in the "scary stories" section! Brilliant!
Jul 31, 2008 Rating
Wow! by: Carrie
Don't be silly Unit! lol! This story was amazing! Whoever thought of it was a genious! x
Jun 15, 2008 Rating
Sweet by: Anonymous
I fell in love with this story, it gave me a great idea.
May 08, 2008 Rating
Amazing by: Anonymous
This story is truly amazing. He who said that this story was lame is truly someone who doesn't have a good choice and taste.
Mar 03, 2008 Rating
Splendid story by: Anonymous
It is really a creative story that has a twist in the tale. Wonderful!
Nov 23, 2011 Rating
Awesome idea! by: Suzan
Actually there is nothing funny in this story but it has an unexpected ending. It is really creative but you couldve changed the part of burglurs into ghosts or something. Something more scary. But Im certainly gonna use this story for my elocution competition. It is sucha good idea and I loved it. Im giving it a 4/5. -
