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The mouse and the cat fight for the CHEESE!

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Nov 29, 2008
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starstarstarstarstar 		HILARIOUS!
by: Anonymous

This is hilarious!
Jan 08, 2009
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starstar 		Not funny
by: Anonymous

Personally, I thought it was unorigional and boring. It also annoyed me how you overused the word "cheese" and put it in all caps. I'm not trying to be mean at all, and I'm very sorry if I am. Keep trying, kid. Practice makes perfect!

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