That story was awesome!! I say that the author should write some more stories like this! They are really interesting!! A message for the author: Please write more stories!!
May 12, 2010 Rating
Very good by: Anonymous
I'm a pro at writing at stories and this is the first story I comment on that isn't mine and I say that it is a good story. My name is Jose. You should read some of my mine. This story is very good and it kept me on the edge that told me keep reading keep reading.