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The Last Great War

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Jan 25, 2008
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Super!
by: Mum & Dad

Who'd have thought that Call of Duty 3 was so educational?

Jan 24, 2008
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Exceptional
by: Gladys

On the whole this was a very, very, good story, I really enjoyed reading it. What was so marvelous for me was that you mentioned how proud you were to be fighting for your country as did so many of our real soldiers in the war. I felt that the story ended prematurely that it could be continued.

I think young man that you could have a career in the media as I felt your vocabulary was exceptional. I look forward to seeing ' another episode' in what could be a saga!

very well done!!

Jan 23, 2008
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Well Done!
by: Gilbert

This is a really well written story and I was impressed with the accuracy of your descriptions of the guns. Were you aware that in reality ' The Great War' was in fact WW1 and not 2? As your story was fiction it really doesn't matter but I just thought I would point this out to you!!

Jan 23, 2008
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The Last great war
by: tallulah {from china } elliotts sister

well done H it was really good how do you get such great ideas ????? bye

Jan 22, 2008
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Fantastic story
by: Cathy

This was a really gripping story, which I enjoyed reading very much. Congratulations to Henry on such an excellent piece of work. Well done!

Jan 21, 2008
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Excellent
by: Georgia

A very good story, it made me feel like I was there also. Henry, you have a talent for writing. I look forward to reading more !!.

Jan 20, 2008
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Blown away!
by: Julia

What an amazing piece Henry, you have clearly done a lot of research before you embarked on this - you make history come alive by writng from a personal perspective, and should be very proud of such a mature piece of writing.

Jan 20, 2008
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A legend...
by: Anonymous

Astonishing......when is the book released?
An excellent portrayal & insight into times during the wars.
A faultless piece of literacy & a skill that will surely be on any publishers hit-list. Well Done!....

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