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Jan 25, 2008
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Super!
by: Mum & Dad

Who'd have thought that Call of Duty 3 was so educational?

Jan 24, 2008
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Exceptional
by: Gladys

On the whole this was a very, very, good story, I really enjoyed reading it. What was so marvelous for me was that you mentioned how proud you were to be fighting for your country as did so many of our real soldiers in the war. I felt that the story ended prematurely that it could be continued.

I think young man that you could have a career in the media as I felt your vocabulary was exceptional. I look forward to seeing ' another episode' in what could be a saga!

very well done!!

Jan 23, 2008
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Well Done!
by: Gilbert

This is a really well written story and I was impressed with the accuracy of your descriptions of the guns. Were you aware that in reality ' The Great War' was in fact WW1 and not 2? As your story was fiction it really doesn't matter but I just thought I would point this out to you!!

Jan 23, 2008
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The Last great war
by: tallulah {from china } elliotts sister

well done H it was really good how do you get such great ideas ????? bye

Jan 22, 2008
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Fantastic story
by: Cathy

This was a really gripping story, which I enjoyed reading very much. Congratulations to Henry on such an excellent piece of work. Well done!

Jan 21, 2008
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Excellent
by: Georgia

A very good story, it made me feel like I was there also. Henry, you have a talent for writing. I look forward to reading more !!.

Jan 20, 2008
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Bahrain Calling
by: Anonymous

A real one man army, with just the righ amount of guts and gore. Private Ryan,eat your heart out.

Jan 20, 2008
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Blown away!
by: Julia

What an amazing piece Henry, you have clearly done a lot of research before you embarked on this - you make history come alive by writng from a personal perspective, and should be very proud of such a mature piece of writing.

Jan 20, 2008
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A legend...
by: Anonymous

Astonishing......when is the book released?
An excellent portrayal & insight into times during the wars.
A faultless piece of literacy & a skill that will surely be on any publishers hit-list. Well Done!....

Jan 19, 2008
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Well done
by: Anonymous

Henry

Great detail which keeps the reader's interest. You have done a lot of background work before writing this story. When are you going to publish the next chapter?

Jan 19, 2008
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The Last Great War
by: Elliott From Cina!!

Hi henry

It is a really great story. Is it real or fiction, but extremely good story.

Jan 17, 2008
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Fascinating. Jane London
by: Anonymous

I loved the way Henry started this story about he war in general and informed the reader of the background. Fascinating details about the guns made it seem very real and I was totally involved in what became a gripping personal tale.What happened to John Sparrow? I'd love to know.

Jan 17, 2008
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Wow!
by: Anonymous

What can I say but... Wow!

A great story, extremely well written.

Jan 17, 2008
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speechless
by: Irene Henry

Well as one Henry to another I would like for you to know that I was left speechless at the end of reading your work. (Speechless is something I am not very often!) How very clever to write this in the first person and to have such powers of description and clarity of scene was fantastic. I really had a visual in my mind after reading.
My Mother had relatives fight in the War so it was of particular interest to have this knowledge of circumstance and environment described so clevely by a young man. Very well done and keep on writing, looking forward to more of your work being published.

Jan 17, 2008
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Another episode please!
by: Nan

What I found amazing about this story was that a child had written it. It really gave me food for thought, for as a rule children are more interested in 'Dr Who' and 'Star Wars' type stories. Being a child he would have had, I presume, no experience of war in this country nor his parents, therefore he had researched his character carefully and was very descriptive with regard to weapons, obviously having researched these too.
I did not want the story to end and my feeling is that this story could be continued. Well done young man!

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