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Mar 19, 2017
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Better writing is a goal...
by: Phil G. (I'm back...)

...one of them. I would hope that our young authors can make use of what they are taught, but that does not always sit well with them. With technology the way it is today, being 2017-03-19, I hope to determine if they have improved their skills over the period in which the web-site was on-the-shelf.

Sadly, given texting, concatenations and little regard for punctuation et cetera, I think we need to work together harder to achieve this.

Mar 09, 2015
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Ladybug and Butterfly short story.
by: Anonymous

Love this little story....it should be made into a little golden book.

May 03, 2016
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good but can be better
by: Anonymous

This is quite an interesting story about friendship and quick wit. However, there are a lot of mechanical errors. This does not set a good writing model for grade three students.

They need exemplary writing to learn from.

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