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Dec 05, 2010
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good but obviose
by: Anonymous

it was kinda obviose but it was very nicely told

Dec 05, 2010
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obvious
by: Anonymous

it was good but i gave it a two because you told the ending twice. put more stuff between the story and when it actually happened. And don't make what happened exactly the same as the story.

Phil G: That's constructive.

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