What can I say? It had everything a scary story needs, suspense, thrill.... the works! Brilliant keep it up!
PS can anyone tell me how long does it take for you story to come on the website? It's been a week and I'm still waiting... thanks! ~~~ Re: Your PS... The stories are not put up automatically and I must edit and approve them. If a story is not good enough (and I am getting tougher to please) I won't put it up.
Make it a good effort, good content, good grammar and spelling... hopefully a good picture and maybe it will get there... and NO PLAGIARISM. I guess yours didn't make it this time because all pending stories in this category have been processed.
PhilG
Apr 21, 2008 Rating
Great! by: Lauren
Great short story. I was shocked at the ending...
Apr 21, 2008 Rating
That's what I want to read! by: PhilG
Excellent job Brad. This story was well written, contained the elements and held my attention throughout. I hope you get a lot of readers as this one is a great example for young writers.
And best of all I could enjoy it while making only a very few small touch ups.
Your webmaster
PS: I'm setting my rating at 4 so others get to make it rise to the top naturally.
