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The Holiday

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Feb 22, 2011
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star 		uhmmm ew.
by: Anonymous

confusing...bad grammar you will never be a writer if you cant talk rite..

Phil G: Anonymous may want to check his or her own spelling before throwing stones.
Nov 27, 2009
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star 		sorry
by: Anonymous

Your grammar was terrible and so was your spelling. Did you read Ghost of the Rising Sun? Because it kind of sounded like you copied that. Sorry, you need some time to improve your stories.
Nov 25, 2009
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starstarstarstarstar 		Wicked
by: Hafsa

This story was great!!! Really gave me the creeps! :) Keep up the good work.

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