The Haunted Corn Maze

by Splunkers
(Washington)

Zombie

Zombie

One late afternoon, in the ghost town of Birmingham, Alabama, a girl named Mallori Anne, went to the haunted corn maze for her friend’s birthday. It’s been known to be the scariest corn maze in America. People believe it is truly haunted. Some say they have seen girls go in but not out.


It was a cold, stormy night when Mallori Anne was waiting patiently in line with Kailey BreeAnn. They were waiting in line when suddenly a headless vampire came up behind them and chased them into the maze, pushing everyone aside.

They entered the maze with fear; it was dark and musky. No one was in sight except those from the dead. Shivering with fear, the two girls wandered hopelessly through the maze. They see what appears to be fog. In the mist of the fog they see an old, rotten, wooden sign. They slowly approached the sign with caution. The sign said “Beware, if you touch any creatures or bodies they can have a revenge attack and if any damage is shown you will face the consequences of death.” When they passed the sign they heard a deathly screech coming from behind them. They looked around, no one was in sight.

Suddenly they felt a flash of cold air on their necks. It gave them the chills. Unexpectedly, a man with a chainsaw carefully followed them just out of sight. On the left side of them, there was a hole, all of a sudden a dead bride wearily climbed out of the hole, just missing Mallori Anne’s ankle.

On the opposite side of the path, there was a possessed clown skipping toward Kailey BreeAnn with a cheesy grin. He rapidly picked her up and threw her into a ditch. Mallori Anne screamed for help while he chased her with a butcher knife. He threw Mallori Anne into the ditch where Kailey BreeAnn was.

Kailey BreeAnn explained to Mallori Anne how she found a secret tunnel that brought them to a catapult that flung them into a graveyard where skeletons guided them out.

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Jun 06, 2011
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Kind of cool
by: Anonymous

Wait.....When they got to the graveyard....Why did skeletons guide them out? You should've expanded on that and not just said 'skeletons guided them out." Overall it was a good story, but not the greatest. I think over tie you'll get better at it :)

Jul 17, 2009
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Cool!
by: Anonymous

Wow great job with the story!

The only thing i did not like about it was the ending. but other than that, great job and keep writing!!!! :):):):)

Aug 31, 2008
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Not the best
by: Anonymous

I'm sorry to say that was not a good story at all and I think you could do better. Yhe ending didn't make sense and the whole story was weird.

Jun 26, 2008
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Cool story
by: NIXI

Cool story LOL!

Mar 12, 2008
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What happened?
by: Anonymous

What happened when they were in the graveyard?

Jan 03, 2008
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What?!?
by: babu, the super writer

Okay, first of all, you need to enlarge the plot, create more details. If you have a short plot, then try to add as many details to that. But don't get me wrong, it was........cute?

Dec 19, 2007
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Cool
by: jacob

Awesome!

Dec 19, 2007
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Greeeaaaat!
by: brianna!

Niiiiice
Very scary
ily brittany!

Dec 12, 2007
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Cool
by: Anonymous

Good

Dec 12, 2007
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I still ♥ it!
by: Taterchick27

I still think it was really good and you guys did a better job than I could have done!
lol :-) ily

Dec 05, 2007
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....
by: jen

i really like your story but not really the ending. not everybody has time to make a perfect story and i liked it enough to give it 5 stars! great job!

Dec 05, 2007
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ily!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by: Anonymous

ily rock on!!!!!!!!!!

Dec 05, 2007
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good job
by: Anonymous

nice job

Nov 28, 2007
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wow
by: Anonymous

i thought it was pretty cool

Nov 28, 2007
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Good job
by: brianna

That is the best story ever please write more.

Nov 28, 2007
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you rock
by: Anonymous

ily! you rock! great story!lol

Nov 28, 2007
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great story♥
by: breezygurl♥

Hey!♥
This story was good except the end♥
that was not so good♥
No offence♥
but i still love you Brittany!♥
lol♥

Nov 28, 2007
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I ♥ it!
by: Softballchick27

I love your story you guys! I gave it 4 stars because I didn't really like the ending, but I still loved it!
Nice job! ♥♥♥

Hannah

Nov 28, 2007
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ok
by: Anonymous

This was pretty good but not scary

Nov 28, 2007
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hello
by: kailey

nice story, NOT

Nov 28, 2007
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Awesome
by: gina

Spooky!

Nov 27, 2007
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wow
by: Anonymous

great job

Nov 27, 2007
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hi
by: Anonymous

Hello! My friends and i are the ones who wrote this story. I just wanted to say to the person who left a nasty comment, if you are thinking about saying something mean, don't say it. all you are doing is putting people down. Thank you to all the others who left a nice comment. i am not saying that you can't say that it wasn't very good but please do not put people down! thank you so much!

Nov 27, 2007
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hey
by: Anonymous

i love your story. the person that said they hated it is just a looser

Nov 27, 2007
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man
by: Anonymous

whoever wrote the won that said it is horrid. this is a great story. good job whoever wrote it!

Nov 26, 2007
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Horrid
by: Anonymous

This had to be the worst scary story ever, who every wrote this.. please do better next time.

Nov 22, 2007
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wow
by: softball freak 12

hey this story rocks!!! ily

Nov 13, 2007
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good title
by: Anonymous

It was a good story throughout the whole thing but I
didn't like the ending.

Nov 12, 2007
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wow
by: Mina

this is a great story

Nov 10, 2007
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scary!
by: Anonymous

very scary!

Nov 07, 2007
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Eerie
by: Kristi

Kept me on the edge of my seat.

Nov 07, 2007
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Scary!
by: Vickie

This story kept me on the edge of my seat.

Nov 07, 2007
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This was great!
by: Jessica

This was one of the best I have read!

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