The only thing i did not like about it was the ending. but other than that, great job and keep writing!!!! :):):):)
Aug 31, 2008 Rating
Not the best by: Anonymous
I'm sorry to say that was not a good story at all and I think you could do better. Yhe ending didn't make sense and the whole story was weird.
Jun 26, 2008 Rating
Cool story by: NIXI
Cool story LOL!
Mar 12, 2008 Rating
What happened? by: Anonymous
What happened when they were in the graveyard?
Jan 03, 2008 Rating
What?!? by: babu, the super writer
Okay, first of all, you need to enlarge the plot, create more details. If you have a short plot, then try to add as many details to that. But don't get me wrong, it was........cute?
Dec 19, 2007 Rating
Cool by: jacob
Awesome!
Dec 19, 2007 Rating
Greeeaaaat! by: brianna!
Niiiiice Very scary ily brittany!
Dec 12, 2007 Rating
Cool by: Anonymous
Good
Dec 12, 2007 Rating
I still ♥ it! by: Taterchick27
I still think it was really good and you guys did a better job than I could have done! lol :-) ily
Dec 05, 2007 Rating
.... by: jen
i really like your story but not really the ending. not everybody has time to make a perfect story and i liked it enough to give it 5 stars! great job!
Dec 05, 2007 Rating
ily!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by: Anonymous
ily rock on!!!!!!!!!!
Dec 05, 2007 Rating
good job by: Anonymous
nice job
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
i thought it was pretty cool
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
Good job by: brianna
That is the best story ever please write more.
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
you rock by: Anonymous
ily! you rock! great story!lol
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
great story♥ by: breezygurl♥
Hey!♥ This story was good except the end♥ that was not so good♥ No offence♥ but i still love you Brittany!♥ lol♥
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
I ♥ it! by: Softballchick27
I love your story you guys! I gave it 4 stars because I didn't really like the ending, but I still loved it!
Nice job! ♥♥♥
Hannah
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
ok by: Anonymous
This was pretty good but not scary
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
hello by: kailey
nice story, NOT
Nov 28, 2007 Rating
Awesome by: gina
Spooky!
Nov 27, 2007 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
great job
Nov 27, 2007 Rating
hi by: Anonymous
Hello! My friends and i are the ones who wrote this story. I just wanted to say to the person who left a nasty comment, if you are thinking about saying something mean, don't say it. all you are doing is putting people down. Thank you to all the others who left a nice comment. i am not saying that you can't say that it wasn't very good but please do not put people down! thank you so much!
Nov 27, 2007 Rating
hey by: Anonymous
i love your story. the person that said they hated it is just a looser
Nov 27, 2007 Rating
man by: Anonymous
whoever wrote the won that said it is horrid. this is a great story. good job whoever wrote it!
Nov 26, 2007 Rating
Horrid by: Anonymous
This had to be the worst scary story ever, who every wrote this.. please do better next time.
Nov 22, 2007 Rating
wow by: softball freak 12
hey this story rocks!!! ily
Nov 13, 2007 Rating
good title by: Anonymous
It was a good story throughout the whole thing but I
didn't like the ending.
