The Girl

by tin_trix08


Emma is alone in their house today because her parents went on a trip for 2 days and 1 night. She is 18 years old and has a boyfriend named John. That night, she called her boyfriend to come to her house because her parents were not there.


A few minutes later John came over and they got comfortable and chatted for hours in the living room and saying how much they love each other.

Suddenly, lightning flashed in the sky, thunder trembling, the wind blew hard and sharp droplets of water were falling from the sky.

“I think you should sleep here tonight” Emma said. “I think so too” said John, both with smiles on their faces. While they were walking upstairs to go to the bedroom, the lightning flashed again and they saw a girl in a white dress, with long hair, a doll in her hand and the girl was smiling at them, then quickly vanished in a spilt second! They were both shocked and rushed to get back to the living room.

The hearts of the couple were pounding as they heard each other's beating. “I think we were just sleepy right?” John said with a big question in his eyes. “I don’t know!” said Emma. They just pretended that they did not see the girl and just stayed in the living room.

The thunder was getting louder! Then, they heard a voice of a girl laughing like there was no end to it. Emma cried and John hugged her with fear on his face. Then, the two woke up hugging each other and realized that it was only a dream. They just smiled and laughed.

A few minutes later, the two heard the car of Emma’s parents. John and Emma went outside to welcome them and while the car was approaching, the two were getting more and more scared because Emma’s father was driving in front with her mother and the girl was in the backseat, smiling!

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Dec 07, 2010
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WOW!!!!!
by: Saffron

WOW!!!!!
That ends with a great cliffhanger. Have you made a second one of what happens to the parents and what the girl does or goes something like that. I think you should becuase thats great. Also the picture at the top makes you feel spookeir in side. Its a great story.

Oct 02, 2009
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okay..
by: Anonymous

this story is okay...could have been better though. more detail...

Jul 14, 2009
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kinda badish kinda goodish kinda scaryish
by: Vanessa

ok wats up wit the girl in the white?
u gota put more things bout the girl if shes just ther and she dusnt do anything then...well nothin that scary about her!

Jun 11, 2009
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awesome!!!
by: Anonymous

This story creeped me out when I read it. Great story!!

Jun 10, 2009
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dauuuuuuummm
by: sugarlips

awesome story!!!!!!!!!I literally got chills down my spine and the picture scared me because it just popped up on my screen

May 28, 2009
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yaaaaaa
by: Anonymous

hey hey!! pretty good!

May 17, 2009
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Whoa
by: Anonymous

I like this story alot actually. One little bit of advice though, when you have an ending like that, lead up to it a little. Otherwise very entertaining.

Apr 15, 2009
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awesome
by: tiara

i liked this story
it was the best one soo far
you should read the t.v screen

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