i can honestly say this is one of my favorites on this site, along with another that involves the "ring around the rosies" song. i feel that that particular nursery rhyme is one of the most sinister, the meaning behind it being of course, the black plague, also to incorporate a common children's nursery rhyme in a horror story adds the aspect of innocents to the story, but at the same time, turns something we cherished as children, into something a lot more terrifying. over all, an excellent story, i give it a solid 5! keep up the good work!
=Mel= (age 15, BC Canada)
Feb 19, 2010 Rating
... by: Laura
Actually, I didn't get very far past the second paragraph because of the formatting/grammar/punctuation, etc, but I'm assuming that underneath the errors is a good story.
So I would say keep it. Of course, I would suggest finding someone to fix the formatting if you don't want to yourself... I could help if you needed, but I'm not even in high school yet... Haha. =)
Dec 09, 2009 Rating
ring a ring by: mole. h
its ring a ring of roses pocket full of poses atichoo ctichoo we all fall down
