This is amazing!!! It was very well written, my only suggestion would be to have a few descriptions. This story is definately publish worthy!
Nov 13, 2011 Rating
tell that boy... by: Effie andrews
If you're not scared of ghosts try living in my house.
Mar 22, 2010 Rating
i loved it by: Anonymous
I lovd ur story! it madee me laugh at the end!
Feb 04, 2010 Rating
Ghost with one black eye by: Anonymous
Your story is hilarious - should be published in book form - Congratulations !
Fran
May 15, 2009 Rating
NOTHING SPECIAL by: Anonymous
WHAT IS SO SPECIAL IN THIS STORY. IT IS JUST LIKE AN INCIDENT. I THINK I WILL NOT CALL IT A STORY. THE CLIMAX IS NOTHING EXTRAORDINARY.
May 10, 2009 Rating
lol! by: Megan Killings-Murphy
I liked your story! I think it would have ben a bit funnier if the lady thought the granpa was crazy when he said it was haunted.
Apr 09, 2009 Rating
good by: nikita
The story was really good.....Birds of a feather flock together.....I'm a budding author like you....We are definitely birds of a flock...... For the protection of our similar interests.....please do visit my blog...... http://niki-story-teller.blogspot.com/ Thankyou
Mar 23, 2009 Rating
A nice Story by: Jay
I like the way the story was told. It gave me a nice feeling as if I was talking to a friend sharing an interesting story from his Grand father's experience. Simple and relaxing. Good for stressed people like me...hehehe
Feb 10, 2011 Rating
its good by: leena kothari
hey ur story was good,but end was too short to digest ,you should have made it more precise.
Jan 18, 2011 Rating
very nice story by: simerdeep singh
very cool story ..i lijed it...if u have more u can mail me at simerdeep@live.in
Feb 18, 2010 Rating
lol by: Brian
hey u can do better its not really great but it was okay. :)
