The Ghost That Lived in My Attic

by nicole
(loucust grove virgina usa)




The Ghost That Lived in My Atic

Once there was a girl named tori and she loved halloween. She would always have a sleepover with her freinds on halloween.

Then one day her parents (sarha and leny)told her that they got transferd to another job in georga. They were living in ohio at the time. So the next day she told all of her friends that she was moving to georga. The were so sad because she would throw the best halloween sleepovers.

Three months later she moved in to her house. It was like a mantion. she loved it. Her room was 25' 15'. She was to nervous about school to go to sleep. That night instead of falling asleep she went to the atic to see if the actual owners that used to live there forgot anything.

When she got up to the atic she saw a picure of James madison. Then she felt a brezze she looked around no windows. She got farther up the stairs and saw so many boxes. Spider webs covered them. She went over to the first box she saw and opened it. It was filled with hand written letters to family and freinds and right there at the bottom it said sincerly James Madison. The first thing tori thought was James madison to used live there. Then all of a sudden she saw the letters get picked up out of the box. But no one was around.

The next day she went to school to scared to concentrate. Affter school she went to the library and recharched read and did everything to get any information on James Madison.

Every night she would go to the atic and she felt the brezze and had things like boxes, anqicues, and letters fly all over the place

Two years later she found out that James madison also lived in georga on the street of 678 democracy court where she was living. Finally she found out the mystery of the flying letters and breeze with no windows. James Madison still lives there.

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Jul 18, 2009
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Good, not great, could have been better.
by: I D

Check your spelling. The idea was creepy, but you should be more descriptive. How did she find out? You should draw it out more, make more scary things happen, have him make a guest appearance.

Jun 13, 2009
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sheesh
by: Anonymous

sheesh ever check ur spelling sweetheart????

Jan 16, 2009
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well...
by: Anonymous

I can see that you could make this story a lot better. I'm not saying you didn't try, but you could try harder.

Nov 02, 2008
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Not good enough
by: nawami

Can`t you do any betters than that?

Apr 24, 2008
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Hmmm...
by: Lucy

No offense, but I have seen better. That was good though. You can tell it wasn't copyright.

Dec 21, 2007
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Oh my
by: kailey

All of those people that were so mean about your story, they're crazy. Not everybody can write perfect stories, and I bet you can write better stories than they could.

Dec 21, 2007
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I liked it
by: Hannah

It wasn't TOTALLY scary but it was good. :-) I liked it and I think you should write more stories.

Nov 18, 2007
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that was ok
by: shelby

It was a tad bit too long for me honey. try making them better by not makinng them so hard to uderstand

Oct 31, 2007
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IT WASN'T THAT SCARY
by: Anonymous

It was ok I guess but I do perfer it to be a little scarier.

Oct 31, 2007
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I DO NOT LIKE
by: Anonymous

TO ORIGINAL I HAVE HEARD STORIES WAY SCARIER THAN THIS

Oct 29, 2007
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WHAT?
by: PB&Mayo

WHY WOULD HE LIVE THERE? WHY WOULD HE THROW AROUND THE LETTERS? WHY WOULD SHE JUST DECIDE TO GO UP TO THE ATTIC... LIKE HMM I AM SUPPOSE TO BE SLEEPING BUT LETS GO UPSTAIRS ANYWAY TO SEE IF I CAN FIND A GHOST TO SCARE THE CRAP OUT OF ME... IT JUST DOESN'T MAKE SENSE TO ME

Oct 28, 2007
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Very cool story
by: Josh

I like this story, sounds cool
but it's not scary enough.
If she was too scared to concentrate then why would she go back in there?

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