Check your spelling. The idea was creepy, but you should be more descriptive. How did she find out? You should draw it out more, make more scary things happen, have him make a guest appearance.
Jun 13, 2009 Rating
sheesh by: Anonymous
sheesh ever check ur spelling sweetheart????
Jan 16, 2009 Rating
well... by: Anonymous
I can see that you could make this story a lot better. I'm not saying you didn't try, but you could try harder.
Nov 02, 2008 Rating
Not good enough by: nawami
Can`t you do any betters than that?
Apr 24, 2008 Rating
Hmmm... by: Lucy
No offense, but I have seen better. That was good though. You can tell it wasn't copyright.
Dec 21, 2007 Rating
Oh my by: kailey
All of those people that were so mean about your story, they're crazy. Not everybody can write perfect stories, and I bet you can write better stories than they could.
Dec 21, 2007 Rating
I liked it by: Hannah
It wasn't TOTALLY scary but it was good. :-) I liked it and I think you should write more stories.
Nov 18, 2007 Rating
that was ok by: shelby
It was a tad bit too long for me honey. try making them better by not makinng them so hard to uderstand
Oct 31, 2007 Rating
IT WASN'T THAT SCARY by: Anonymous
It was ok I guess but I do perfer it to be a little scarier.
Oct 31, 2007 Rating
I DO NOT LIKE by: Anonymous
TO ORIGINAL I HAVE HEARD STORIES WAY SCARIER THAN THIS
Oct 29, 2007 Rating
WHAT? by: PB&Mayo
WHY WOULD HE LIVE THERE? WHY WOULD HE THROW AROUND THE LETTERS? WHY WOULD SHE JUST DECIDE TO GO UP TO THE ATTIC... LIKE HMM I AM SUPPOSE TO BE SLEEPING BUT LETS GO UPSTAIRS ANYWAY TO SEE IF I CAN FIND A GHOST TO SCARE THE CRAP OUT OF ME... IT JUST DOESN'T MAKE SENSE TO ME
Oct 28, 2007 Rating
Very cool story by: Josh
I like this story, sounds cool but it's not scary enough. If she was too scared to concentrate then why would she go back in there?
