This was great....wow! I ahd to do an hw assignment and wow this story is absolutely amazing. Did you make this up? If you did... great great job. I loved it!
Oct 17, 2009 Rating
wow by: Anonymous
that was great it really kinda scared me
Oct 10, 2009 Rating
opps by: yummy
i didn't notice the mistake. sorry!
Oct 07, 2009 Rating
Spooky by: Anonymous
Great story.I really like how it ended, it leaves the reader hanging, but you kinda know what happens next.
Oct 07, 2009 Rating
wow by: callmephysco
ecellent story. very good although i think you have a spelling mistake.