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Jan 18, 2010
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Sorry
by: Taylor

I did not put this on the website instead my mum put it there so i did not know it would be put under 'scary'

Jul 14, 2009
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Sorry not that scary for me
by: Vanessa

i agree with Anonymous.

she said:
no offense but this isnt that scary AT ALL, but its a good story

it should be more scary. what if there eas a ghost instead of a dragon? and change the story around a lil.

Jun 07, 2009
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by: Anonymous

no offense but this isnt that scary AT ALL, but its a good story

Apr 07, 2009
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Great Effort
by: Hailey

You did wonderful. I could tell you put a lot of effort into this story and it shows.

Dec 11, 2008
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Great
by: Anonymous

This was won of the best stories i have ever heard. the only thing is, how was it scary

Nov 28, 2008
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Amazing
by: Zoe

You're a born story writer. I loved it. You kept me interested throughout the whole story. Your attention to detail was amazing! Keep writing :)

Nov 06, 2008
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Excellent
by: Pamela

I can't believe how well that story was written. Taylor is a future star... Move over JK Rowling! LOL

Oct 30, 2008
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Great story
by: A child from 6JW Fairfield Road

Great story Taylor, I know everyone in our class is proud of you!

Oct 27, 2008
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Brilliant
by: Shirls

Excellant Taylor, I'd love to say it was a surprise to read such a brilliant story from you, however anybody who knows you will know what a cleaver young man you are. Don't stop there though can't wait for your next one! Brilliant! Proud to know you xx

Oct 26, 2008
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Well done!
by: Christine Read

Hey Taylor, now this is not bad, the beginnings of a good writer who uses imagination, action and description. Well done, will look for your book when it comes out.

Oct 25, 2008
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The Dragons Den
by: karen

Wow! What an amazingly well written story with great expression and brillant descriptions. What a talent Taylor has. This will be the first of many to come. Have showed a few of my friend's and they are all of the same mind as me that this is an excellently written and is an excellent story! Well done.

Oct 21, 2008
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The future's bright
by: Anonymous

A very well written story, with an expansive imagination and understanding of good content.
The first of many I hope. Best sellers in the future?

Oct 18, 2008
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Talented young man
by: Robert from FB

I wish I could have written like that when I was that age. Still trying. You're a very lucky lady to have such a special and talented boy.

Oct 18, 2008
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Brilliant
by: jane

This is a great story written by my son Taylor.
Im very proud of him, this is his first story to be put on any website, hope you all enjoy it as much as we did.

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