Whoah... The woman was looking at him through the keyhole.... SCARYLICIOUSLY AWESOME
Oct 07, 2011 Rating
Love it! by: Anonymous!!
Amazingly Fantastic! It gives me ideas for my story! Thank you! :)
Sep 28, 2010 Rating
Great job by: Anonymous
This is absolutley amazing! I just about jumped out of my seat when it said her eyes were blood red. Really good job!!
Apr 22, 2010 Rating
wow by: ann
i like this story..^^
Apr 21, 2010 Rating
Goosebump! by: Bibiellena
Great ending!!! I caught myself goosebumps after knowing what happen at the end! Nice job. keep it up and looking forward for more interesting stories :)
Feb 27, 2010 Rating
write more by: Anonymous
very good you are a really good writer i wonder why her husband kills her and i wonder if the man knocks on the door please write more i will read
Oct 28, 2009 Rating
good by: Anonymous
good story
Oct 12, 2009 Rating
great story by: Anonymous
holy cow! My friends and i loved this story! We got major goosebumps tho. Great ending!
Oct 04, 2009 Rating
AWESOME!! by: Anonymous
WHOA! That was really good! If you made this up, you have a talent. That ending was great!!! It made me picture how i would feel with a dead person inches away from me. whoa VERY VERY GOOD!!!
Oct 01, 2009 Rating
Brilliant :) by: me
v. good stry really enjoyed it :D
Aug 27, 2009 Rating
Wow by: Alyssa
Aww man, great ending.
Aug 24, 2009 Rating
Very Good Ending! by: Anonymous
Wow. This gave me goosebumps. When I finished reading it I couldn't stop shivering. I loved it!
