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The Doll

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Feb 16, 2008
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Nice
by: Anonymous

This was great for a scary expert on me. You might have read mine, you can run but you can't stay alive. You should do a part 2.

Feb 16, 2008
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Great!!
by: Anonymous

Good and scary story!

Apr 17, 2008
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Just horrible
by: Anonymous

I'm assuming a kid wrote this...

First of all, what kind of parents would buy their baby son a "doll"? Especially an "adorable doll"? Do they want their son to grow up a sissy?

Second of all, who would pay $100 for a doll? Stupid concept.

But anyway, it could have been worse. Better luck next time.

Feb 21, 2008
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Dude thats so wierd
by: znon

Dude are you serious this story is horrible!!! It's short and stupid. Like come on REALLY have some sense in your writing. I don't even get it, it's too weird!!!! I bet $100 that I will write 10 times better than-NO ONE KNOWS WHAT HAPPENED TO THE LITTLE BABY- dude that's wack!

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