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Jul 20, 2009
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ummm...
by: Anonymous

I thought the girl was dead???? What happened? I dont get it at all!

Is that seriously the ending!!!!?????? She picked up the phone... i dont get it!!!

Apr 12, 2009
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dude!
by: Anonymous

dude!what happens?

is there a nother part?if there is...what is it called?

Sep 30, 2008
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Ending?
by: Anonymous

Is that seriously it? I need to hear more.

May 02, 2008
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OK.
by: anonymous

That was good but add more.

Can anyone tell me how long it takes for your story to be on the website?

My story is called 'My Dog'.
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Yes, I can. It takes 1 or 2 days depending on how many stories or how busy I am with other things. However, that said, the story cannot be a copy of something else, it had better be a good honest effort, and it has to be sufficiently long to warrant a page. Also check your spelling and grammar. If any of these conditions are not met, I reject the story. I don't know about 'My Dog' unless it is pending perhaps. It may not have passed my tests though.

Your webmaster: PhilG

Apr 24, 2008
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Add more
by: miracle

I think that you should have added more to the story because it was getting good.

Apr 02, 2008
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So what happened?
by: Anonymous

Wait a second I thought that the thing killed the girl?

Mar 28, 2008
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How !
by: Anonymous

How does it end?

Mar 24, 2008
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Mysterious finale
by: LU

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