I know there are many because the entire time I was typing the story, my 3 and 7 year old siblings were running around the room trying to play jail break police chase or something. Terribley sorry about all the errors! Hope they didnt ruin the story too much!
Dec 29, 2009 Rating
The ending by: Anonymous
It came to an abrupt ending. Many grammar errors. What was supposed to be scary about that? What was the point?
Oct 06, 2009 Rating
great story by: callmephysco
i think thats a cool story although i think it more sad than scary. I liked it how danniel wasnt mean to bey. :-)
Oct 02, 2009 Rating
good job by: Anonymous
i think its a little more sad than scary but you did an over all fantastic job!!!
Sep 26, 2009 Rating
cool by: Anonymous
im fritend, yes, but i allsow find the story beautiful! itīs realy scary but the way that the friendship of the 2 friends contineud... but seriusly, im terrefied... :)
Aug 23, 2009 Rating
good by: Paige
I love that story! it is kinda scarey, but u could have done better with the chill factor.
