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Dec 29, 2009
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Grammer Errors
by: Writer

I know there are many because the entire time I was typing the story, my 3 and 7 year old siblings were running around the room trying to play jail break police chase or something. Terribley sorry about all the errors! Hope they didnt ruin the story too much!

Dec 29, 2009
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The ending
by: Anonymous

It came to an abrupt ending. Many grammar errors. What was supposed to be scary about that? What was the point?

Oct 06, 2009
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great story
by: callmephysco

i think thats a cool story although i think it more sad than scary. I liked it how danniel wasnt mean to bey. :-)

Oct 02, 2009
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good job
by: Anonymous

i think its a little more sad than scary but you did an over all fantastic job!!!

Sep 26, 2009
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cool
by: Anonymous

im fritend, yes, but i allsow find the story beautiful! it´s realy scary but the way that the friendship of the 2 friends contineud... but seriusly, im terrefied... :)

Aug 23, 2009
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good
by: Paige

I love that story! it is kinda scarey, but u could have done better with the chill factor.

Aug 22, 2009
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wow
by: wow

thats sad great job!!!

Aug 21, 2009
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Well-written story
by: Kara

The story was well-written and kept my interest.

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