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The Cry

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Nov 25, 2010
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starstarstar 		IT WAS OKAY
by: Anonymous

it was a okay story
Oct 11, 2009
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star 		try again
by: Anonymous

Whack....It's too predictable. Plus no thrills or chills in in. i mean you had a good build up but you lost it somewhere in the middle.
Oct 02, 2009
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starstarstarstarstar 		wow
by: Anonymous

wow, great story. you should have added a little more detail in the beggining byt the ending was great
Aug 22, 2009
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starstarstarstarstar 		Awesome
by: Anonymous

Good work

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