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Nov 25, 2010
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IT WAS OKAY
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it was a okay story

Oct 11, 2009
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try again
by: Anonymous

Whack....It's too predictable. Plus no thrills or chills in in. i mean you had a good build up but you lost it somewhere in the middle.

Oct 02, 2009
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wow
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wow, great story. you should have added a little more detail in the beggining byt the ending was great

Aug 22, 2009
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Awesome
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Good work

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