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Oct 23, 2009
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Bad Ending
by: Anonymous

The ending could have been a lot better. Its highly unlikely and even a little bit too far unimaginable to get knocked out again right when she was going to call the police.

Imagine, a comment that was almost written correctly. Unfortunately 'its' is grammatically incorrect in this case, but thank you so much for commenting so well.
Phil G.

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