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The Accident

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Jul 08, 2008
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starstarstarstar 		Good Work
by: Anonymous

It was good, and entertaining to read. However it was also a bit confusing and the dialogue in the middle would probably have been clearer if you had used paragraphs.

All in all, good work. Your writing is quite good =]

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