Terror of the bird

by Justin, age 10
(Toronto, Ontario)

Bearded Vulture

Bearded Vulture

Deep in the heart of a forest on a cold winter’s night, you’re by yourself in a log cabin all alone. Your parents are gone to get some fire wood but they’re not home yet. You look at the clock it’s nearly 7:00pm.


You decide to go look for your parents but you hesitate at the door for few moments. You remember rumors you heard about people disappearing due to a giant bird called the Thunder Bird but it’s just a rumor. So you ignore the thought.

Just as you are coming out the door you hear flapping. It’s coming closer and closer till BAM!!! you are knocked down.

Then you look up, right there was a giant bird but there was no time to watch GRAB!!! the bird got you in its beak!!!! You start to punch and kick the bird till finnaly the bird gives up and drops you, but now you’re falling at the speed a 150mph through the sky. You wait for your doom to come but it never came. Then snap!!! everything disappears in a flash.

Then you wake up wheeww it was all a dream!!!!!

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Nov 25, 2010
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dude...
by: Anonymous

dude... it was kind of a let down it was just a dream

Oct 04, 2009
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bad
by: Anonymous

not scary...... at all.

Nov 03, 2007
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short
by: Anonymous

good start but toooooooo short!!

Oct 29, 2007
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WHAT?
by: PB&Mayo

You needed to have your story more developed and talk about how the bird ripped him to peices and how his bones cracked and crunched as he hit the tree's and then when he woke up he was sitting in a pool of sweat.... BETTER DEVEOLPE make me wonder ?why?

Sep 21, 2007
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bleak
by: Anonymous

wasn't scary

Aug 24, 2007
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A bird by any other name
by: Tommy

I liked the way he named the bird. It kinda made you get more involved. Well done Justin.

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