Something scary

by Author of Hide and seek and Cry for the dead...
(Toronto Ontario)

My friend Maria died a couple of months ago in a terrible accident. There were many sightings of her at my school, where she had lost her life.


It was after school and everyone had gone home.
Mr.Smiths, the janitor, stayed behind to finish cleaning up the classrooms. When he stopped at ours, he saw a girl our age, standing behind the teacher's desk, reading a book. Mr.Smiths went in and said "I'm sorry little lady, but school time is over." The girl turned around, apologized and walked away. Then Mr.Smiths saw her. Maria... with the lower part of her body... missing.

Maria smiled at him, almost as if she knew something about him, and vanished.

After that, everyone knew what had happened to Maria. Her missing half, was probably caused by a car accident, since the school was so close to the highway. Maria probably wanted us to know that, because after that night, she was never seen again. This scared Mr.Smiths the most because...

He was the one who was driving the car.

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Oct 04, 2009
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the author
by: Anonymous

ok first of all to the people who said that i copied, I DID NOT! this is just a story i made up and if you dont believe me than so what. i know if i copied or not. to the people who were NOT rude, no maria is not real and thank you for rating :)

Jul 16, 2009
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did u copy? really?
by: Vanessa

ok.
i like hide n seek.

Jul 09, 2009
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u seem to have copied something
by: Anonymous

You copied Stephen Kings story: Sometimes they come back.

Oct 16, 2008
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what
by: Anonymous

IS SHE REAL

Sep 30, 2008
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Cool
by: blank

This story is awesome

Aug 08, 2008
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Gosh
by: Anonymous

Is Maria real??? Anyway I love this story!! MORE STORIES!! Cry of the dead and Hide and seek are great too!!!

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