Snake Attack

by Kychelle Young

This is a Banded Krait

This is a Banded Krait

BAM!! You toss your bag on the ground of the damp forest floor. You're in search of a snake that was extinct, but was somehow seen one year ago. Your back welling with pain starts to relax. "Come on", yells your dad. You jump up, grab your bag and start again.


"I'm hungry" you say. "well, we will stop and eat later" your dad shouts. "Well I hope it's fast". You start walking again. Thud, you hit the ground. With a thud you slipped. You go to get up but something slithers across your hand. You look down scared to see what it is.

"Ahhhhhhhhh" you yell. A snake was looking at your head, its eyes seeming to glare and jump as you start to turn a deep red. Too scared to watch, you look away. A sharp pain jumps though your arm as to kill you. You writh in pain. The next thing you know more of them start crawing on your legs.

You sceam... where is your dad? You look up. He is above you. "Help" you yell. He smerks "why would I? I took you here just to die. You are so sad and wish he was kidding, but he just walks away. You now might face your death.

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Oct 04, 2009
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what?
by: Anonymous

what? i didnt get it... it wasnt scary at all

Jul 18, 2009
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What?
by: Anonymous

Yeah the story makes no sence! That was not scary ya know...

Jan 09, 2008
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Simple and pretty good
by: WannabeG00D

A nice and fast told story. I myself liked it a lot, because I am very afraid of snakes and just reading about them gives me chills.

Good Job :D

Oct 20, 2007
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by: Anonymous

You need to tell us more about the characters. The story really made no sense.

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