Sleep walking

by Carrie Alexander
(N. Ireland)


"She kissed the prince and..."


"David lights out!"

"OK Mom." David closed his book and turned off his night-light. He fell asleep dreaming of love, peace and happiness...

David woke up with a "BANG"! He opened his eyes. "AAAAHHHHHHHH!" His Uncle Jack lay dead in front of him. He noticed the slit on the right side of his head. David was holding an axe covered in blood... "But...But...But..." David kept saying. "WAIT! I must be dreaming! Yes that's it!

I always sleepwalk, and the doctors said bad dreams come with it. So I must be dreaming. YES! THAT HAS TO BE IT! It's my sleep walking that has made me have a bad dream. That's all it is! I mean how could I have gotten here?! Ha!" He kept talking to himself as he set down the axe. David’s eyes fell closed... "Uncle Jack's dead... Must get home..."

"David!" David opened his eyes. What a bad dream, he thought! Why am I wearing my shoes, David wondered.

"David!" his mother repeated. "What's wrong Mom?" David noticed his Mom's tear-stained face.

"It's about Uncle Jack...."


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Oct 11, 2009
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Well done
by: Jess

Hey Carrie. I read your story and loved it! You told to try out your stories and they were cool! Check out my story ,the truth hurts. Tell me what you think of it too.

Aug 27, 2009
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emm...
by: Carrie

Wow how extrodinary! im sooo sory about your mum. Well it could have happened it might not have happend it might be a legend or it might be a fact but the truth is it came rushing into my head and i can't help but feel i wrote it for some reason unknown to me...xx

Feb 25, 2009
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scary but
by: mrtw

very nice story! is it truei?
When I was 13 I dreamt that I was in a pool and my mom's friend was dead next to me. In the morning she was dead. I don't know how but it happened.

Jan 17, 2009
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Good!
by: Anonymous

Good job. Your story hooked me in!

Dec 21, 2008
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=)
by: Tasia

This was interesting...i liked it very much actually good job!...

Sep 27, 2008
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Good story
by: Anonymous

It was slightly scary. By the way, it was good.

Sep 21, 2008
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Hi!
by: Carrie (the author)

Hey it's me again!! Sorry you're probably sick of me commenting my own page!! LOL!! Em just want to say thanks to the person who liked my story! And I was just wondering if you had any stories if so I would love to read them!!
Regards,
Caz x

Jul 31, 2008
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wow!
by: Anonymous

Wow THAT STORY WAS, WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!

Jul 29, 2008
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Hi
by: Carrie (THE AUTHOR)

Hey guys! Its carrie the author of this story! Hope you enjoyed it and you'll send me comments and tell me what you think of it!! Also read "Revenge" and "Saved by prayer" by me! Lol!
Regards,
Caz x

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