1 star. wasnt that scary. to much dialogue. needed more detail..work on it..h
Dec 21, 2008 Rating
=( by: Tasia
this story seemed all over the place to me some points it was very good but would you honestly just climb back into bed if there was a pool of blood and your little sisters dead body....??? think about it and would you return back into a chat room and talk to this man like nothing.... you should work more on creating a more put together story if this were being graded on TAKS scores you would most likely fail....
Jul 31, 2008 Rating
Wow! by: Carrie
Wow! I'm very impressed! I have to say, that story was very, very good! x
Jul 08, 2008 Rating
Good Work by: Anonymous
I like your story =] It's quite good.
However I'm not really sure how the heart at the back of the closet comes into it.
