Sister in the mirror

by Fizz Smith
(UK)

I was sitting alone in the sitting room, it was great. The show went on and I watched quietly, my mum was at home and only had 10 minutes before her night duty work started. She turned the light on and looked at me, staring at the TV with my dark eyes.


"Too late my dear, time for bed, school tomorrow" said my mum. She stood with her suit on, and her purse stuck in her sweaty arm.

"No mum only 2 minutes please" I yawned.

"No your sister is upstairs and I told her that you're coming" mum smiled. She turned the TV off and got a hold of my hand, "Birthday's in two days"

I ran upstairs, I heard mum close the front door and the car left.

"Sally, can I have my mp3 player back?" I asked. She had borrowed it while I was watching TV.
There was no reply, so I decided to go into her big bedroom.

The lights were off, and there was no sound. I didn't bother to turn the light, I saw a shadow in the mirror so I went running. Sally was standing like a statue, she didn't move a muscle. I put my hand on her shoulder and slowly she moved her face towards me.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhh" I screamed.

She started to laugh a evil laugh. "Got you at last" was the only thing she said. Leave me, her eyes were set right at the end, her lips were ripped, in half, her nose was bleeding.

"What did I do?" I asked.

"MP3" she said.

Then I realised what had happened, and then my mind went blank and I fell down dead.

IF YOU HAVE AN MP3 PLAYER SHE WILL GET YOU!
ha ha ha ha

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Nov 14, 2011
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Doesn't work
by: Anonymous

No tension
Story didn't flow and I struggled to follow it
Needs a lot more description
What happens with an MP3 player and how can you still be talking if you have dropped dead?
Good title through but it doesn't fit.
Sorry, but it needs a lot of work!

Jan 20, 2010
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WAAAHH?
by: addicted

i dont get this story....
what happened? mmp3? waaaaah? i dont get it...
Sister In The Mirrior? Waaaah... Didn't fit together...

Aug 04, 2009
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i dont get it
by: Emily

2 things:
1. how does the title fit in with the story
2. why does she get you if you have an MP3 player

all your story needs is some more detail, but good effort.

Apr 15, 2009
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wow
by: tiara

Why does she get you with an mp3 player??
Will she come if u have an i-pod??

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