Seeing Ghosts

by Abby Star
(Miami, Florida, US)

One day my mom was vaccuming in the upstairs hallway when all of a sudden, the vaccum turned off. My mom turned around to see the cord had been unplugged. She was a little suspicous but, she just thought she pulled it out of the wall on accident and began vaccuming again. When she was finished she turned to look out the window....standing right in the window was a scary old man!!!!!


Now she closes the window curtains every time she vaccumes in that hallway.

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Nov 18, 2007
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Your story sweep me off my feet
by: cassie

I loved your story. It was one of the best story's ever made [watch out you might become a movie director]

Nov 14, 2007
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Its very nice
by: Anonymous

Its very nice story

Oct 31, 2007
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by: rusty

I thig you need more detal and you need to put more scary thing in your story but on the other hand I like it so fair.It is doll and boring so i think you shoud put more detal in to your writing so put more detal in to it By rusty.abatie

Oct 26, 2007
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is it true
by: Anonymous

that is a good story but is it true

Oct 15, 2007
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too short
by: Robert

no buildup, just a creepy ending.

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