I loved your story. It was one of the best story's ever made [watch out you might become a movie director]
Nov 14, 2007 Rating
Its very nice by: Anonymous
Its very nice story
Oct 31, 2007 Rating
more by: rusty
I thig you need more detal and you need to put more scary thing in your story but on the other hand I like it so fair.It is doll and boring so i think you shoud put more detal in to your writing so put more detal in to it By rusty.abatie