Rosie

by Anna
(California)

So there we were, having a sleepover at Suzy Whyman's house, telling scary stories. Jordyn was just finishing up hers which wasn't very scary, but you know, we didn't want to be mean so we shivered at the end anyway. Anyway, we were sitting in our sleeping bags, having a great time when the lights went out. Five of us started screaming and crying while Rosie just sat there, smiling. "Ok", I thought, "She probably pulled the switch." So I sat there, not scared anymore.

When the lights went back on, we noticed something was wrong. Little did I know my life had changed forever. Jordyn was so scared, she looked frozen. We poked her to see if she was all right, but when we did, she fell over, dead. We all started screaming over again. Rosie just sat there quietly smiling her kind of creepy smile. Suzy ran downstairs to call her parents (who were out) while Julia and I ran to get help, but when we reached the front door, it wouldn't open. That's when I suddenly realized... we were trapped. Trapped inside a house with no parents, just five teenage girls, and one of them was dead. And Rosie. We were trapped inside a house with Rosie. The same Rosie that I just realized was the brown haired, brown eyed girl, that had killed several people.

"Get out of the house," I said to Julia, but when I turned around, I saw that she was dead too. I screamed and ran to find Suzy. Finally, I found her, still alive, but very shaken up. I told her what I had found out, and she agreed with me that we had to find a way out.

We ran all over, opening windows but each time we found one it was bolted shut from the outside. All the time, while we ran, we could hear Rosie chasing us. Finally, Suzy and I found a window that was open, but it was two stories up. By this time Rosie had caught up with us and she was so close we could hear her breathing. Our only choice was to jump, and we did. As we landed, I heard Suzy scream with pain. She had broken her leg. It took all my might to pick her up and carry her to my home. As I ran with Suzy in my arms, I looked back at the Whyman's home. I saw a face at the window staring at me, smiling. It was Rosie.

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Oct 04, 2009
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Anna
by: Anonymous

it wasnt very good. it wasnt scary. shes just a homicidal friend all f a sudden? no good. p.s Anna Poor Story speaks the truth crap is not a cuss word so get your mind straight!

Sep 26, 2009
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wow
by: filew

That's realy cool! you have talent! keep writing!

Aug 30, 2009
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to whoever wrote Poor Story
by: Anna

hey man whatever you think about my story is up to you, and you have a right to your opinion. But seriously dude, this is a CHILDRENS site, and I don't think anybody needs to hear you cuss. Get a life. (I took out the bad language Anna, Phil G)

Anna the author

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And by the way, unlike you,I actually wrote my name instead of Anonymous. And your comment was poorly written, so don't say my story was. If you wrote any stories, I'm can tell that they probably didn't get accepted because of your lack of skill in writing. But if they did, then I'll know that excellence in writing means nothing to anyone anymore.

Aug 11, 2009
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Poor story
by: Anonymous

wow this story was a peice of crap! it had no plot, no good reasons, nothing! i mean any of them
could have been a killer but why that rosie chick?
whats her background story for her to go psycho all of suddent? This was poorly writen...

Jul 15, 2009
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Thanks!
by: Anna

The reason Rosie killed her friends was because I guess I wanted to give the impression that she was a serial killer, 'cause on I wrote about the girl who had been on the news because she'd been killing people. I think. Anyways, thanks for your comment! It feels REALLY good to know people like my stories!! Thanks again!


~Anna~

Jul 14, 2009
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woah
by: Vanessa

Wow this is SOOO creepy its on my top 5 list keep up the CREEPY work. ok if this happened to me on a sleepover i would be scared to death. HEYYYYY that means if im dead rosie has no chance to kill me!!!!!! hey whos rosie anyways? i dont get it why she kill them?

Jun 21, 2009
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wow
by: Anonymous

my bff and i read this at our sleepover and it scared the crap out of us. good job!

Jun 20, 2009
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Tanks
by: Anna

You guys are awesome!! Thanks so much for all your support. I'll be sure to read your scary stories and post comments on them to! Thank you!
:)

Jun 20, 2009
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Thanks!
by: Anna

Thanks soo much Emily for your support!! I'll read your story too! Thanks! :D

Jun 19, 2009
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Eeek
by: Emily

That was soooooooooooo scary! Like no joke! That was awsome! You could have added more about being stuck in the chase seen with rosie. But still everything else was fantastic! Mine, "The Prison Break Sleepover", isn't even close to as good as yours!

Jun 18, 2009
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Awesome
by: Anonymous

That story is on my Top 5 list! Keep up the great work

Jun 11, 2009
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to sugarlips
by: Anna

Thank you for the comment, sugarlips!!! That was real nice of you to say that!!! If you write any stories I'll be sure to comment on them! Thanks!

Jun 10, 2009
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dauuuuuuummm
by: sugarlips

wow this story is great and freaky at the end..o what comment title meant was that it was creepy not weird.. wierd in a scary way...keep on writing more and keep up the awesome work

Jun 04, 2009
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Gee, thanks.
by: Anna

Thanks for the lousy comment, comment title. That just made my day.

May 26, 2009
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by: comment title

great, so two died one broke a leg one is fine and one is a murderer...thats wierd.

Apr 13, 2009
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gosh
by: tiara

It was so good
keep writing more
like this!!plz!

Jan 24, 2009
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Great
by: Call me Zozo

I thought your story was great! Write more plz!!!!!!!!!

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