Revenge

by Carrie Alexander
(Markethill)

Jenny was a cheerleader. She could do flips, jumps and execute the most daring tricks. During a practice routine she heard horns and sirens. When she realised they came from her friend Sarah's house she got dead scared... (but not for the reason you think...)


Since she was in school, she could not leave it to see what was happening but it was all she could think about during her next class. Suddenly her principal came in and called her into his office to talk to her. This is bad news she thought. Her principal told her that Sarah had been in a car accident on her way home from a doctors appointment. Someone had crashed into her!

They were being interviewed. Jenny was really scared now. And Sarah had well, you know, died.

The police figured that Sarah's neighbour was responsible for her death for putting a bold coloured sign on the side of the road - therefore distracting the driver.

The next day Jenny was in her bedroom when she remembered the week before when Sarah had been asked out by a boy Jenny had been crushing on for weeks, and Sarah accepted! What cheek! Suddenly the phone rang. It was Sarah's ex-boyfriend, Jenny's crush, asking her out! Of course she said yes! Oohh a bonus, Jenny thought! Jenny lifted a page from underneath her bed. It read:

Plan

1)Pay Jason to crash into Sarah's car. x
2)Look sad about it. x
3)Make a date with Josh.

And as she put an x on the last line she laughed.

The next day she sat in court watching an innocent man get arrested. And as she did this she smiled to herself and sat in silence....

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Oct 31, 2010
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xxx<3
by: Carrie

Hey Guys, thanks so much 4 the amazing comments.. Will definately be reading your stories. Keep them comin!! (: xxx

Oct 11, 2009
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Got any more?
by: jess

Hey carrie, do you have any more stories like that?! they keep me at the edge of my seat! Check out my stories, the cheater, the truth hurts, dark colors and LOTS more!

Oct 08, 2009
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Very creative.
by: Anonymous

This story was actually quite interesting I enjoyed it. Good work!

Oct 02, 2009
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wow
by: Anonymous

great story! this took envy to a hole new level!!

Sep 21, 2009
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A really good story
by: Jessica

I liked this, I was really hung up on suspense at the beginning, that's for the comment on my "Wrong number" story! ;D

Jul 05, 2009
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ouch!
by: Marie

wow! that was really twisted....i love it! lol! write more stories like that!

Jun 07, 2009
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Thanks
by: Carrie (AUTHOR)

Wow Anna! thankz for your great comment! I can't wait to start reading your amazing stories! By the way you can check some of my other stories like babysitting and saved by prayer!
Thank you to every one who commented!x

May 29, 2009
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verry nice!
by: Nicoleee

This was actally quite good! I never thought that your own sister would plot something so devilish, it really brought out my thought(:

Mar 18, 2009
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wow!
by: Anonymous

wow! awesome story! I loved it!

I think Jenny is a little harsh.

Mar 04, 2009
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amazing!
by: Anna

Hi Carrie! I thought your story was fantabulous!!!!! I did not expect her to have killed her BF!!!!! that was like genius!!!! I wrote some stories too, like Rosie, Room 113, Special, and so on..... Well anyway good job!!!!

Dec 21, 2008
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=)
by: Tasia

wow... i like the way you put this together....

Oct 22, 2008
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Good suspense
by: Shaina

That was a really good story. You kept the suspense going. lol Byess:)

Jul 29, 2008
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Hi!
by: Carrie

Hey Vicky hope you had a nice holiday! I have written two more stories... "Baby - sitting" and "Saved by prayer". Have you got anymore? Thanks for the great comment...
Love Caz X (AUTHOR)

May 31, 2008
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Good job.
by: Victoria

I have always wanted to be a writer. and since you left my story Bone Dry Killer some AWESOME comments, and asked for advice on your story "Revenge", I thought I'd make you happy! That was an awesome story!!! Ten thumbs up. Check your spelling though. That's all the advice I could give you! Good job! :)

May 21, 2008
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Brilliant
by: Anonymous

That was one of the best stories I have read in a long time.

From you know who

May 19, 2008
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Amazing!
by: Anonymous

Hey Carrie that was great! The words you used and the theme was excellent! You are a superstar and a phenomenal writer!

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